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SA-Able Story by IChiTa--WiYa SA-Able Story by IChiTa--WiYa
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I'm trying to make a children's story by based on Able...

maybe some of you didn't understand it...

Oh well... :'D

I hope it's good...

Please tell me if there's grammar errors XD
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:iconyagamiseven:
Yagamiseven Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
this is really good
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:iconichita--wiya:
IChiTa--WiYa Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Student General Artist
thank you :3
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:iconkaguyatsukihime:
KaguyaTsukiHime Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Then a young girl named Hanabi showed up fell in love with his cuteness and accepted his crybaby trait and said "Be my servant. If you refuse I'll have to to drag you home"
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:iconichita--wiya:
IChiTa--WiYa Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Able : whaaat ?! :icondesucraiplz: that's not it....
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:iconkaguyatsukihime:
KaguyaTsukiHime Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Hanabi: shush >////> *snuggles*
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:iconichita--wiya:
IChiTa--WiYa Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Able : I'm no crybaby! :noes: but you still bully me! If I be a bit mean, you're the one who went crying...
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:iconkaguyatsukihime:
KaguyaTsukiHime Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Hanabi: Shaddup bully! ;-; i only bully you because i love you
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:iconichita--wiya:
IChiTa--WiYa Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Able : But... :noes: ( I love somebody else...)
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:iconkaguyatsukihime:
KaguyaTsukiHime Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Hanabi: No you don't! *cries*
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:iconichita--wiya:
IChiTa--WiYa Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Able : Eh ??!! But... but...


Tragic love :icontearplz:
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:iconsupermochi:
SuperMochi Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012   Digital Artist
..And than Able turned Bishie
*O*
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:iconichita--wiya:
IChiTa--WiYa Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student General Artist
eh ?! really ? //shot
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:iconsupermochi:
SuperMochi Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012   Digital Artist
at the last panel ouob
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:iconichita--wiya:
IChiTa--WiYa Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Student General Artist
lul! :dummy:
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:iconsupermochi:
SuperMochi Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012   Digital Artist
:la:
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IWillFly Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought it was so cute but then at the end... really beautiful, that was such a deep story. I love the old-time-fairy-tale sitting-around-the-fire feel to it, a great style for a children's story and very cute drawings ^-^ The only thing I'd say in the writing was when you said "he turned the ___ offer" the wording like this "he turned the ___ offer down" is more correct. Although the way you have it feels very styled and unique to you. It's not incorrect the way it is, it just might make people pause wondering why 'down' wasn't there. All in all I love this! You inspire me to make something like this :giggle:
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:iconichita--wiya:
IChiTa--WiYa Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh~ I see XD

Thank you for the comment XD
I inspire you ? thank you ~ :iconiloveitplz:

I can't wait to see yours!
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:iconeullie:
Eullie Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww, that's a lovely story. I love the simpleness yet its deep meaning.
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:iconichita--wiya:
IChiTa--WiYa Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you~ :D

I'm really glad you can understand it! :D
because my friends didn't quite understand the meaning~ XD
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:iconeullie:
Eullie Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;A; Awww, that is too bad~ I hope your friend will be able to find out soon~
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:iconhell-scyth:
Hell-Scyth Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2012   General Artist
Good job. ^_^
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:iconichita--wiya:
IChiTa--WiYa Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Many thanks! XD
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